Editing Exercise

1. The first place I went was to Mr. Herb's, but to my surprise when I opened the front door his house was empty.
2. I paused thinking of some kind of little fib to make it more fun then what it actually was.
3. “This is how it went,” said Josh.
4. Mr. Clean's house was an ugly yellow color. 
5. A silly lion wouldn't defeat me, but I’m not going to risk waking a lion and hurting him. 
6. The tree in the back yard stood so tall; within the tree was the tree house not just any tree house, it was a magic tree house.
7. Its not that big, but it's yellow with a blue roof. 
8. No wonder he is in the old folk’s home, he shouldn’t be allowed to drive. 
9. It was shinny. I thought it was something I lost in the tree when I was playing astronaut a few days ago.
10. She took her paper out and started to role it up, so I went on the run again.
11. So to save time we jumped the fence, not knowing that our neighbor was mowing the lawn we ran out in front of the strip he was mowing, that must of made him mad because he chased us quite a ways up the road. 
12. My dad saw me and said, “I’m going to count to three if you don't get off the top of that car you are grounded for a week!"
13. But I didn’t see anything scary, I just seen a cute little puppy; the puppy had his collar caught on a branch. 
14. Jonah knew it was getting at least three o’clock and he needed to come home soon because his grandparents could already be worried sick. 
15. I let out a little yell when it turned on and he let out a chuckle and said in his friendly voice “Hey, sorry if I startled ya!”
16. The world is such a sick and twisted place now. It’s not safe for children to go out by themselves when there’s maniacs such as rapists, murderers, etc. on the loose.
17. There is a maze, and you must pass through at least five courses to finish the maze.
18.  Later on that day I decided to go for a little hunt back in the woods to see if I could get any birds or if I could spot a deer.